Poetry (4 Viewers)

Dan

Dan

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Mar 9, 2004
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++ [ originally posted by Erkka ] ++
screw you 15-year olds dammit... :irritate:


:D


I just don't like the style of it...
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Perhaps if you want my more 'poetic' side instead of my original poetry side, read my poem i posted here called 'chapter'
 
Erkka

Erkka

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#84
Mar 31, 2004
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that's better... but I have to admit that I still don't like it... :sigh:

I'm used to read something much deeper when it comes to poetry... Sad that you can't really translate poems, I could recommend you something to read... A.W. Yrjänä and L.Onerva for example... And Eino Leino, naturally... :D
 
Dan

Dan

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Mar 9, 2004
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hehe. Ive been told my poetry is amazing for a 15 year old, and considering that 'chapter' was written over 9 months ago, im pretty proud of it.
 
Dan

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Mar 9, 2004
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Im not doubting that, no 15 year old could know as much as a grown up, life experience comes into a play. But grown ups think teenagers are brainless prats, which is a wrong view, and stereotypical.
 
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baggio

baggio

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Jun 3, 2003
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    Hey bessie blackmint's right. Tho i dinno u were a teen too. Your drug poem was too mature for a 15 year old !!?!
     
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