Poetry (1 Viewer)

baggio

Senior Member
Jun 3, 2003
19,250
#1
Ok, dont know if any threads have existed on poetry in the past. Just thought we should have one. Feel free to share your poems or any other creative articles .
Here's a poem i wrote up last nite. For the record, it wasnt written with anyone particular in mind.



A familiar silence,
I try to understand.
As it envelopes my conscience.
But then again, it never goes as planned.

I’m defeated in an instance,
Another moment without you.
I live a destiny in your absence,
Mocking fate, that offers nothing new.

Where do we go from here I wonder?
As my dreams continue to fade endlessly,
But that isn’t the impression I’m under
Because time promises to set me free.

In the meantime, I try and write a story,
But its hero doesn’t want to be me.
For I am without glory.
Exquisite pain being my only achievement.
 

Asma

Doctor Asma
Oct 21, 2003
3,658
#14
Your love was never made to die
if u knew how much i love you,
you will never say goodbye,
if u knew how much i need you,
you will never even try,
if you knew how much i miss you,
you may think that i might die,
Baby,should i beg and cry?
should my tears never dry?
or should i tell you that your love is the only thing that i can not deny,
And now u r leaving me without even saying why,
oh darling,when u went away i was in so much pain,
will i forget you?i will really try,
will i forgive you?will i?
will i hate you;i cannot say yes and tell a lie,
becuz ur love in my heart was never made to die... :heart:

is it good?
 

Erkka

Senior Member
Mar 31, 2004
3,863
#15
"The ancient conception of the temple as the imago mundi, the idea that the sanctuary reproduces the universe in its essence passed on to Christian Europe: the basilica of the first centuries of our era, like the medieval cathedral, symbolically reproduces the Celestial Jerusalem"

- Mircea Eliade -

from the beginning of Somnia, my favourite book of poems...

"Dulce et utile."
 

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