Poetry (1 Viewer)

Jan 7, 2004
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#22
++ [ originally posted by baggio ] ++
hehe, ok bessie how abt some creative work from you now?

how about a poem that a chick said she wrote for me.


We're dancing together in the darkness of the night
Our hearts are filled with love, and you're holding me tight
Love is like a dream, one you've never had
It opens your heart; it makes you happy and sad
You kiss me softly, and I stare at your face
We are in a dream, a fairy tale place.



:lazy:


i am not creative but as soon as something comes up i ll post it here
 

Erkka

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Mar 31, 2004
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#30
++ [ originally posted by Don Bes ] ++



how about a poem that a chick said she wrote for me.


We're dancing together in the darkness of the night
Our hearts are filled with love, and you're holding me tight
Love is like a dream, one you've never had
It opens your heart; it makes you happy and sad
You kiss me softly, and I stare at your face
We are in a dream, a fairy tale place.



:lazy:


i am not creative but as soon as something comes up i ll post it here
that's just like Horatio said: "Dulce et utile."

:D
 
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    Bes, thats a very nice piece. Looks like uve got a keeper. :)

    Miss D, loved the intensity in your piece, although, its hard to believe u wrote that for Johny Depp. Gtta be for someone closer to town, and ur heart. ;)
     
    Jan 7, 2004
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    #33
    ++ [ originally posted by baggio ] ++
    Bes, thats a very nice piece. Looks like uve got a keeper. :)

    Miss D, loved the intensity in your piece, although, its hard to believe u wrote that for Johny Depp. Gtta be for someone closer to town, and ur heart. ;)


    im likin this.


    lets have a contest and i will win
     

    Asma

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    Oct 21, 2003
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    #34
    ++ [ originally posted by baggio ] ++

    Miss D, loved the intensity in your piece, although, its hard to believe u wrote that for Johny Depp. Gtta be for someone closer to town, and ur heart. ;)
    t was for johnny :D no one else...i will post another poem soon!
     
    Jan 7, 2004
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    #36
    some more from the same author of the first one

    *YOU

    Cool waters reflect your face
    Mirrors your beauty and gentle grace
    All the things that I would say
    You took all of the words away
    By your face I know you feel the same



    *Gotta Let You Go.-
    I love you more than you will ever know
    This is hard for me, but I gotta let you go.
    You have hurt my heart in many ways
    You don’t even know you are doing it, yet it happens everyday.
    I love you so much - more than words can say
    But I have to let you go, its better for me
    You are my one and only And I wish you could see.




    *Frustrated

    I'm frustrated because I can't tell if it's real.
    Frustrated because I don't know how you feel.
    I'm frustrated because we didn't talk last night.
    Frustrated because we can't make things right.
    I'm frustrated because there is no trust.
    Frustrated because I know we must.
    I'm frustrated because I need you night and day.
    Frustrated because I can't have things my way.
    I'm frustrated because you don't want to take my hand.
    Frustrated because I can't make you understand.
    I'm frustrated because I can't feel your gentle touch.
    Frustrated because I miss you so much.
    I'm frustrated because we can't be together.
    Frustrated because I'll love you forever.
     
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    Ok here's another from my collection: its called Bliss.

    My instincts blur,
    As a void begins to fill.
    One, that I try to conquer
    In my quest to hold still.

    I don’t feel pain.
    But I want to heal.
    There isn’t anything to gain.
    But I want to feel.

    Escaping my misery,
    With each passing thought.
    I try and break free.
    But my mind has me caught.

    The light flickers,
    As I begin to fade away,
    In to the darkness that lingers.
    Silently hoping, time will stay.
     
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    ++ [ originally posted by Don Bes ] ++



    ya. too bad i didnt write them
    Well considering they were written for you, it's even more of a compliment. ;)
     

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