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Asma

Doctor Asma
Oct 21, 2003
3,658
i lay awake in my bed,
with a headache that will never end,
there is not a shred of evidence to lead me to the right path,
sometimes,i think i am a psychopath,
Lord,what have i done to deserve this?
cuz it hurts me severely and leaves me amiss.

All these anonymous messages,
The unexpected,strong and strange visualisations that pass infront of my view,
are they normal?i think not.
is this a vexed problem?or is it a blessing?
is it true?or is it false?
are they dreams?what are they exactly?
why do they hit me?are they hereditry?

Premonitions come and go,
without knockin' on my door!:down:
 

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Daddi

Cuadrado is juan hell of a derby king!
Oct 27, 2004
7,900
this is my poetry:

Up your ass with broken glass

Suck my dick you little prick

if you dont I'll slit your throat

(sorry, I'm in a bad mood today..)
 
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baggio

baggio

Senior Member
Jun 3, 2003
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    Asma, you'll be happy to know one of my poems got selected by the international library of washington and theyre publishing it in a book titled 'The best poets of the year 2004' :)
     

    Asma

    Doctor Asma
    Oct 21, 2003
    3,658
    ++ [ originally posted by baggio ] ++
    Asma, you'll be happy to know one of my poems got selected by the international library of washington and theyre publishing it in a book titled 'The best poets of the year 2004' :)
    oooh oooh..could u please post the poem here???:D i'll surely buy the book..when will it be released?
     

    Asma

    Doctor Asma
    Oct 21, 2003
    3,658
    coo0l!! iam looking forward to reading each and every poem.thanks for informing me ;)

    how do you find the last poem i posted?is it good? :)
     

    Daddi

    Cuadrado is juan hell of a derby king!
    Oct 27, 2004
    7,900
    I suck at writing poems...my girl want me to write her some, maybe I should learn :p or copy from this thread, hahahahHAH!
     

    Asma

    Doctor Asma
    Oct 21, 2003
    3,658
    :lazy:


    it doesnt matter if you copied countless poems and gave it to her..cuz she'll know who wrote them from the words and feelings expressed :)
     

    Asma

    Doctor Asma
    Oct 21, 2003
    3,658
    the latest:

    Broken-Hearted

    Struggling to survive with a broken heart,
    asking the lord for help,
    after the day you tore my soul apart,
    i was no longer myself,
    in the coldest corners of this city,
    i walk alone feeling so shitty.

    Your betrayel was like poison moving throught my viens,
    and it felt like i was held by chains,
    faces surrounding me from every angle,
    feeling sorry for me,
    laughing at me,
    my soul was haunted by your lies,
    do you really want to see me die?

    I'll grant you that wish,
    for I no longer exist,
    I bid this world farewell,
    and i dont think a soul would tell.
     

    Asma

    Doctor Asma
    Oct 21, 2003
    3,658
    "Do looks matter?"

    He thinks he is sexy,
    he thinks he is cute,
    Though no one would let me,
    identify the truth.

    He thinks he can buy me with his looks,
    but i never gave a "poo hoo",
    the best days of my life went wasted,
    all in exchange for your "looks-crave",
    Fed up with my silence,
    he could wait no more,
    asked for my number,
    but i didnt think he'd actually call!

    Promising to be true for eternity,
    I,for some reason,made up my mind,
    gave him my number and the secrets of my life,
    True for an hour,lying for a day,
    what made me think he'd make me gay?
    Iwake up in the morning,
    listen to his stories.....mostly boring,
    i had put up with his lies,
    by avoiding him and i cried,
    for so many nights

    Sadly,he wasnt there to realize,
    how sick a person was I,
    Go to hell!...i dont need you anymore!
    All in all...do looks matter at all?




    you might be like "the topic of this poem is totally opposite to the content" !....it needs thinking deeply and u'll probably interpret it correctly! ;)
     
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    baggio

    baggio

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    Jun 3, 2003
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    Could've had a better title at least, Asma. :p Preferred Broken Hearted to this one above.
     

    Enron

    Tickle Me
    Moderator
    Oct 11, 2005
    75,252
    Enron original 7 minute freestyle:

    arctic monkeys look so cold
    they dont like bananas
    stevens failure gave italy gold
    i like sebastian diesler
    cause nobody needs him
    you never see what beats you
    only see the lights dim
    i had dry ice
    there was an explosion
    and then she died
    going through the motions
    we needed to be somewhere
    i though about iceland
    its tough to be a soldier
    too hard to be a good man
    i told my mother
    she said "Im sorry".
    i told my father
    he told me "dont worry".
    im riding the airplane
    its started to dive down
    the oxygen is calming
    we're starting to spin round
    blood rushes through my head
    i can smell the burning
    the end is near
    for her im still yearning
    ground is much closer
    I cannot wait.
    OH NO!
     

    3pac

    Alex Del Mexico
    May 7, 2004
    7,206
    ballin betta dan brian hull
    diz hardXcore nigga gon break ya skull
    take a hit from mah 3 foot bong
    an u be gigglin on the floor all night long
    pop ya colla, make bitches holla
    praise allah, and roll a dolla
    cus the dash is where you find the coke
    back from the 80s wit a puff of smoke
    benjamins, mirrors n razor's
    punk bitches gettin shocked by tazers
    its hard bein a lord like me
    when the street's got niggas like DP




    wasn't that touching ? :D
     

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