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baggio

baggio

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Jun 3, 2003
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    Although its wrong for me to preach. But it would be a good idea to kick the habit while you can. You dont need it. ;)


    Time for another poem up here? Bessie what u got!?
     

    Asma

    Doctor Asma
    Oct 21, 2003
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    hehe :D @Don

    aiight people,this is a poem i wrote a couple of years ago..worst poem ever... "Summer Times"

    i was walking on the water and the sun was like fire,
    singing like christina but i felt so shy,
    there were people everywhere,
    playing and singing like they dont care,
    when there was a boy shouting :HELP!
    the tide was high,
    and the boy still cried,
    Abra Kadabra... there was a life savior,
    helped the boy with no faliure,
    and then there was an icecream van,
    with chocolate icecream and soda cans,
    i asked for an icecream cone,
    he gave it to me,
    but oh lord,
    i was not plaeased,
    becuz for an icecream cone i couldnt afford,
    then there was a girl,
    whose hair was in curls,
    she helped me out with the money,
    but she looked really funny,
    this was wht happened to me on summertimes...

    silly? :dontcare:
     

    gray

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    Apr 22, 2003
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    ++ [ originally posted by MISS DUBAI ] ++
    duh! offcourse...i already mentioned i wrote it some years ago...!
    when i was 10,i guess...
    ++ [ originally posted by MISS DUBAI ] ++
    singing like christina but i felt so shy,
    wow, I didn't know Christina was famous 6 years ago :)
     

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