Ive checked out miriamchristine. She is a pretty good singer, the music is pretty good (although it seems like it isnt finished sometimes) but the lyrics are terrible.
I really like this, the guy is a good singer and the song starts of pretty great. I totally love the way he drops during certain words, nice.
However im not that keen on the chorus, i dont really like how he changes his voice for chorus starting from:
"one last time and one last try hold on, in 20 minutes ill be home
hold on, 20 minutes thats all"
Id totally cut the whole enrique style 'i will make you change your mind' line.
The song really picks up again from 'oh things wont be easy' then to go back into the chorus which im not keen on.
I think it ends to fast also. Maybe put fading singing or whisper 'hold on, hold on, hold on' in there.
Id recommend picking it up for the chorus rather than the mono singing. Also the music is alittle to loud for the singer sometimes, maybe tone it down just alittle.
Havnet downloaded the other songs yet. Are you in this band?
Oh and your probably thinking im extremely critical
, well yeah i am. But forgive me ive been doing it all year for uni and i want perfection