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Rushy

The Poet
Jul 3, 2004
193
#1
A place where you can display your own poems and criticize other poems or praise, what ever you like...

I love to write poems, though I have no skills... I therefore wished to cre8 this topic... I hope thats ok with you admin-peoplzzz, respect 2 ya'll...

"Bianconeri" by Rushy olsen
Bianconeri
a club which is merry
Althoug in a crisis
She knows were her smile is

I love ma club
every scout every sub
We still are the best
But this year will be a test

A test on our patience
A test on our naivety
But we'll prevail
We cannot fail
 
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Rushy

Rushy

The Poet
Jul 3, 2004
193
#5
Dan said:
Well the only way I can take it is a joke. In that case, it was quite alright

roflmffpao...

it's poetry, on a looow level... sucha low level that the intention is that it is funny... almost like a clown...
 

gray

Senior Member
Moderator
Apr 22, 2003
30,057
#6
I haven't written a poem for a good 15 years, but I put this together for a painting I'm planning. It's not finished, because I'm well aware there are some parts that don't flow properly... but what the heck, here it is:

My fingers clench around the rose
Its purpose, love's confession to speak
Now cruelly rendered obsolete
Flesh meets thorns in deadly embrace
Crison drops rain earthward bound
Mimicking tears I dare not cry
Lest my eyes, now masquerading
Betray thoughts unreciprocated
Wind rushing by cedars above
Howls and mocks my agony
Sadist's laughter manifested
Relishing spite's cruel reckoning
I search in vain for words to speak
Then turn to flee her icy gaze
Leaving trampled in my wake
Love's declaration, lifeblood
 
Apr 12, 2004
72,413
#9
You want a poem???

Here is a poem:

In his prime who sells Olli Kahn?
Screw Inter, but more likely, Milan,
One has trophies, the other none,
INTER SUCKS MILAN'S DICKs, son.
Totti this and Totti that, it's still Roma,
Shoddy this and Shitty that, it's all a misnoma.
Serie B? Thanks a lot Moggi...
How long out of Calcio, you can still..


LICK MY SCROTTY!
 
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Rushy

Rushy

The Poet
Jul 3, 2004
193
#10
ßömßärdîër said:
You want a poem???

Here is a poem:

In his prime who sells Olli Kahn?
Screw Inter, but more likely, Milan,
One has trophies, the other none,
INTER SUCKS MILAN'S DICKs, son.
Totti this and Totti that, it's still Roma,
Shoddy this and Shitty that, it's all a misnoma.
Serie B? Thanks a lot Moggi...
How long out of Calcio, you can still..


LICK MY SCROTTY!


that's what i call a quality poem... honestly...
 

ZoSo

TSUUUUUUU
Jul 11, 2011
41,645
#17
I once had a piece of gum,
put it in a girl's bum,
she said it was no fun,
so I shot her with my gun

the end.
 

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