Lets here you freestyle (1 Viewer)

jamal

New Member
Feb 10, 2004
17
#22
from my book of rhymes

Real nigga quotes I tote, got some shit on the free but
This some shit that I wrote, legendary like The Goat
Who got game? Giving a quarter rest while I make these quarter notes
My album, niggaz was expectin, now my water broke
Before it, I was sorta broke
Get the paper for the funnies, sports and the horoscope
On a curry goat, like flu stokes order coke
You sharp with your rings and chain but you short a rope
At the end of the road trip still, I'ma hold shit down like syndrome
HO's like LAC tryin to get home
Rarely get your touchdown, I'm in the end zone
You can't honor what I'm on, then ***** nigga, get gone
From the wind storm, I've been told the street folklore
Body language spoke raw, don't talk to broads that are spoke for
That provokes war, stand out like cold sores
You claim that you hard but you wholecore
George Bush and CIA, you movin old or
I Wright like Richard for publishing while you sold yours...



yo LAC aint dissin you personaly man just using ur name up in there to give it alittle flavour u know wat i mean so take it easy son
 

jamal

New Member
Feb 10, 2004
17
#25
Why don’t yall understand im super hot
Either you’re dumb or you’re smokin pot
My lyrics is like a virus causing MC’s to rot
LAC thinks he’s 2pac but he’s not
DA DON thinks he’s 50 cent but he’s not
I’d kill these wannabes with one shot
My gun type is like a lyrical glock
My mind is like a damn lyrical robot
Sorry I got a bit carried away
But with fakes like these I just need to play
To me emceein is like a must
My rhymes are so quick I’m leavin yall in my dust
Plus im leavin yall in a lyrical lust
Yall fakes need an M.C healthcheck
I’m leavin the game in a complete wreck
I keep beatin yall your all history
Why you keep comin back is such a mystery
Some beef is big and some beef is small
Wat yall call beef is not beef at all
 

Mac

Senior Member
Jul 11, 2002
1,411
#27
++ [ originally posted by gray ] ++
Josh, your lyrics are good for what they are, but personally i get annoyed when people talk/rap like that.
Word :D :p

++ [ originally posted by gray ] ++
the cat sat on the mat
it was wearing a hat and eating a rat
holding a bat and sporting a tat
its fur is covered with gnats
:thumb:
 

MCPIERO

Senior Member
Jul 23, 2002
931
#29
LAC that was funny man I hope you become famous:cool: Jamal mobb deep stlye nice:cool: my computer is dying thats why I hardly post

Alright check it one two one two

The team with no fear JUVE
27 Scudetto JUVE
One minute we down the next we up JUVE
From the womb to the tomb JUVE FOR LIFE

Black and white running through my blood BOOM
Oh shit I heard a thud
Quick duck run for cover Its Nedved with another scud
Mr Bionic Super Sonic battlin inner demons everytime he hits the field
This man is real, realer than real harder than steel, 31 years a blessing
Got more stamina than MC Hammer
Hustle and hound ya leave you outta breath
FORZA JUVE until his death
Now let me pick up flow and show you whats it all about
I will play for Juventus with only God by my side
You may laugh now when you here where I reside
But I’ll never let my dream die
See Im a smart street brother, muslim so I gotta watch out for them
Undercovers clamin were terrorists my brothers are held like hostages
I ask whose world is this? Glass shatters freeze frame my dome batters
Talk some sense dreams is for fools man you so dense
Says a voice inside my head
This earth is cold kid you could end up being dead in a blink of an eye
So don’t try to watch out for others
But ill give my life for my mother no doubt ITS ON YOU
Eh Yo I pray five times a day that’s exactly how I support JUVE
Oh watch out, high ball over the top one touch kills the ball Is it Raul?
Please its ALESSANDRO DEL PIERO THE GREATEST OF THEM ALL
God given talent bestowed since birth
He’s what Da Vinci is to art a perfectionist from the very start every movement
Is like a choreagraphed picture from a movie scene
They say that hes lost what he once had but what hes got is still better than youll ever have

Minds gone blank Im out so don’t shout MCPIERO rippin from the bloodclout
 
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Layce Erayce

Senior Member
Aug 11, 2002
9,116
  • Thread Starter
  • Thread Starter #30
    ++ [ originally posted by MCPIERO ] ++
    LAC that was funny man I hope you become famous:cool: Jamal mobb deep stlye nice:cool: my computer is dying thats why I hardly post

    Alright check it one two one two

    The team with no fear JUVE
    27 Scudetto JUVE
    One minute we down the next we up JUVE
    From the womb to the tomb JUVE FOR LIFE

    Black and white running through my blood BOOM
    Oh shit I heard a thud
    Quick duck run for cover Its Nedved with another scud
    Mr Bionic Super Sonic battlin inner demons everytime he hits the field
    This man is real, realer than real harder than steel, 31 years a blessing
    Got more stamina than MC Hammer
    Hustle and hound ya leave you outta breath
    FORZA JUVE until his death
    Now let me pick up flow and show you whats it all about
    I will play for Juventus with only God by my side
    You may laugh now when you here where I reside
    But I’ll never let my dream die
    See Im a smart street brother, muslim so I gotta watch out for them
    Undercovers clamin were terrorists my brothers are held like hostages
    I ask whose world is this? Glass shatters freeze frame my dome batters
    Talk some sense dreams is for fools man you so dense
    Says a voice inside my head
    This earth is cold kid you could end up being dead in a blink of an eye
    So don’t try to watch out for others
    But ill give my life for my mother no doubt ITS ON YOU
    Eh Yo I pray five times a day that’s exactly how I support JUVE
    Oh watch out, high ball over the top one touch kills the ball Is it Raul?
    Please its ALESSANDRO DEL PIERO THE GREATEST OF THEM ALL
    God given talent bestowed since birth
    He’s what Da Vinci is to art a perfectionist from the very start every movement
    Is like a choreagraphed picture from a movie scene
    They say that hes lost what he once had but what hes got is still better than youll ever have

    Minds gone blank Im out so don’t shout MCPIERO rippin from the bloodclout

    quality man! wow! how long did that take you??!
     

    MCPIERO

    Senior Member
    Jul 23, 2002
    931
    #32
    On the real about 15-20 mins. I was thinking and typing at the same time.Its not the same as real life freestylng obviously. Thanks LAC. Im above average at best. I got some mates who spitt books on the spot:D I aint into the rappers of today at all. All image/style rappers. They all rap about the same thing guns, hoes, Gs, cars how much they got how bad they are. ATCQ, NAS, Rakim, Blackmoon, Mosdef etc are my inspiration. Im proper happy you liked it man:D By the way how do you sound when you rap? you gonna use ur real voice for your track?
     

    MCPIERO

    Senior Member
    Jul 23, 2002
    931
    #34
    Thanks Alex.
    Why doesnt every member hit some rhymes at least like 10 lines min. Its not about being amazing, who are you trying to impress. This aint Rap Idol.
    It could be BA BA BLACK SHEEP HAVE YOU ANY WOOL YES SIR YES SIR THREE BAGS FULL. Its about making it fun, I wanna hear the girls rap to, shopping, maxing credit cards etc . I doubt there will ever be a topic like this again . Nice One LAC:cool: So dont be shy. It doesnt matter if youre not into rap just rhyme its easy. Take care.
     

    Martin

    Senior Member
    Dec 31, 2000
    56,913
    #37
    The only thing that comes to mind is a poem I wrote like 6 years ago after the World Cup about Zidane. And that one is way too lame to go on here, in either case I don't have it anymore. :D
     
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    Layce Erayce

    Senior Member
    Aug 11, 2002
    9,116
  • Thread Starter
  • Thread Starter #38
    MC Piero(;)) I dont rap in my tracks. I just write the beats. I can write lyrics too but I dont do that a lot. Most of them are racist/politically incorrect/insulting etc- not deliberately but just to be funny. Im thinking of posting some more of my stuff here.

    BTW if you dont like the rap currently out there- (incidentially most of my stuff parody's bentleys and rolexes and bling-bling and hoes), take a look at kanye west. I didnt know he existed until I heard of him on UPN9 News@10 like 4 days ago, and then yesterday I heard him on the radio on my trip to school on the bus.

    Name: Kanye West

    http://www.mtv.com/bands/az/west_kanye/artist.jhtml

    His cd's called College Dropout(on roc-a-fella records), sold 441,000 copies in its first week to arrive at #2
     

    Dragon

    Senior Member
    Apr 24, 2003
    27,407
    #40
    ++ [ originally posted by Alex ] ++
    The only thing that comes to mind is a poem I wrote like 6 years ago after the World Cup about Zidane. And that one is way too lame to go on here, in either case I don't have it anymore. :D
    I bet you know it by heart
     

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