I like it, and would definitely buy a jersey like it. Personally, I like the thicker striping, something like that with a collar would be outstanding.
Unfortunately, I was sure I've seen that kit before, and I was right. It seems to be someone's fantasy design from footballshirtculture.com
I think like it or not, what we're getting is more than likely the ones on page 1... inoffensive for sure, but far from perfect, and far from creative.