This is the criticism my professor gave me for my "nature documentary".
Aaron,
I really enjoyed "Suburban Wilderness: America's Forgotten Frontier"--even more with the narration. I still think Get off of our property! is the iconic statement of suburban wilderness. Your visuals were strong, the music was good, and the message timely. A few of the cuts were a little rough and abrupt, but overall a very good film. You should submit it to the American Conservation Film Festival. I gave it an A (90). Aaron your work has been excellent all semester it was nice having you in another class. You are a very thoughtful student!
Cheers,
Mark