Shoutout! (1 Viewer)

Apr 12, 2004
72,411
#1
Don't f**k with me, I have your glass jaw broke, no hope, in 5 places.
Throw the left-hook, got dealt the cards, 4 Aces.

Now listen up, because I got a couple shout-outs,
I'm tired of some people runnin' off at their dirty little mouths.

Fliakis always want to start shit, he must think he's hard shit,
Well, if he came over here, he probly get knocked un - con - cious.
Because I be a grown ass man,
I'm pretty sure than he ain't even got a plan, for his LIFE,
Gay marriage must be legal, he wants me, to be his WIFE.
But, he's got more men on his back than the f**kin' Shaq attack,
And don't try to turn this shit around on me,
Cuz that would be the pot callin' the kettle black.

My main man Black, Danblack, or Blackmint would have some peoples legs broke, cracked or in a splint, I tried to stop him, stop him, but I just kint.

Nick, dog, you're makin' me SICK,
Everytime I turn around, you got another bone to PICK!

Don't worry, I got something to say to Pado too,
He is the only grown, bald, man to come in a shoe.
Y'all know he got the blue........balls......makin' all those 1-900
Phone........caaawls.

I fall asleep everytime I hear Emma speak,
But I could beat my meat for a week, and
That's from only the sight of her feet.......

Claire hails from the country of Mr. Tony Blair,
blah blah, talk as much shit,
I just don't CARE!
Cuz apparently what I'm sayin' just...... ain't...... no Muuusic...
Pull out a 4 - 5 and I suggest you uuussse it.

As for me? shit.
I'm like a sick, rich, ill mix of Charles Manson,
And Sir Richard Branson.

So please, do me the favor.

Close your eyes, think, realize,
Picture' youself crushin' me with your tough talk,
That's like Christopher Reeves doin' the crypt walk.

But I don't hate, I discriminate agianst the people I don't like,
or can't take............




All grammatical mistakes were intentional. Everything is said in jest, not meant to be taken personally.

Copyright 2005, Michael Bürke Enterprises Inc.

Thank: Andy, for helpin' me write some of these sick rhymes, and to God, not!
 

Majed

Senior Member
Jul 17, 2002
9,630
#5
Nick, dog, you're makin' me SICK,
Everytime I turn around, you got another bone to PICK!

Don't worry, I got something to say to Pado too,
He is the only grown, bald, man to come in a shoe.
Y'all know he got the blue........balls......makin' all those 1-900
Phone........caaawls.

I fall asleep everytime I hear Emma speak,
But I could beat my meat for a week, and
That's from only the sight of her feet.......

Claire hails from the country of Mr. Tony Blair,
blah blah, talk as much shit,
I just don't CARE!
Cuz apparently what I'm sayin' just...... ain't...... no Muuusic...
Pull out a 4 - 5 and I suggest you uuussse it.
Well, What'ya know.. Burke has finally made a contribution!

Not too shabby.. the best part is what i quoted as it flows better than the rest.

I'd add some transition between the Emma and Claire parts though. As for the rest, I think it needs a lot more work. You're on to something though. Kudos.
 

Dragon

Senior Member
Apr 24, 2003
27,407
#16
++ [ originally posted by Bürke ] ++


You are, but you do not talk to me as much as you should, I will do a verse about you if you want me to.
If you want me to talk more to you then talk to me
 

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