everything but the girl... (8 Viewers)

[Azzurri7]

Let me tell you something gutter, something you don't know about me.

I do enjoy reading poems, some books, political magazines etc... But reality is, you look like anything but a writer to me... Maybe it's my English? My taste? Perhaps. But I don't seem to want to continue reading the first paragraph after reading the first line. I really tried reading the first few lines but I just couldn't. You need to ask yourself why.

I think even writers do need charisma and style and you don't seem to have any of them. No hard feelings.

 

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[Azzurri7]

Weird and Wonderful I would describe that post.

Nice.

So, what did you most like in that post? What caught your eyes? And how do you rate it? What's missing? And explain to us what you understood so we can share our opinions if possible.

 

[Red]

I'm not terribly interested in your literary exploits, Gutter, largely because I feel your style is rather pretentious.

I would also question whether a forum where very many people do not speak English as their first language is a place your way of writing is likely to be appreciated.

You are, of course, free to write however you want, but you have to accept you are setting yourself up to be shot at, to some extent.

 

[Nicholas]

Nice.

So, what did you most like in that post? What caught your eyes? And how do you rate it? What's missing? And explain to us what you understood so we can share our opinions if possible.

I just fancied bringing some light into a dark thread.

 

[JuveJay]

I don't like reading comma-infested rambles too often but he's quite interesting.

 

[Trezegol17]

Smoke a joint or drink some good alcohol and continue your life, you will meet plenty of girls, but please talk to them in 1 sentence and not a complete book.
Then you will be fine bro!

 

[WΏΏdy?]

so how many of you ppl suggest reading that?
we should make a poll

 

[ßöмßäяðîëя]

tell me, 'azzurri', why is it, that even when you try, blatantly to goad me into flames, and I remain smouldering, do you then, once again, within minutes, repeat your attempt??? Can you not see...that when I do not meet your eagerness for puerile chest beating, with venom, you make yourself look so small, and meaningless????

Why don't you, as you have done with plenty of other threads in this forum, simply avoid commenting, especially when your comments are solely aimed at antagonism???

For this thread is both an open expression of self, and likely, a story, that some, perhaps not many, but some, will relate to...

so, seriously...why try to make it into some kind of battle??? Truly, there is no need. I dont wish to insult you. I do not wish to fight anyone on these forums, for its futile, fighting on a screen...why not just try and accept 'that chap, gutterpoet, is merely sharing his lunacy, in a forum which is littered with other members sharing their lunacy...and whilst i dont like him, showing myself, purely in order to cause a stir, is rather...childish...so why not, simply avoid the needless bother??? and let that gutterpoet chap, like I let others, express himself, in the correct forum, and leave him be?>????'...

He hates the use of more than one question mark, as if the stroke of one more means twice or double the prior.

May I suggest: ?^3 or ?x10^3

Because there are other, more suitable forums.

You're never going to be a writer.

Many thanks, Seven, for your constructive critique of my wordsmithery...I don't seek validation from you, because your general wordplay, is lacking both common sense and colour, but still, i will thankyou for reading, and commenting, and wish you well in all that matters most to you.

Untrue. Almost all of his posts have both.

1: you simply don't understand me. I don't write on these forums seeking comment about my style of writing. 99% of my posts, are focused on Juventus.2: I write elsewhere, as in NOT ON JUVENTUZ.COM, for commentary on my literal efforts. And I actually earn, a pittance, but still something, each month, for writing news reports for my friend's weedguru website. Which isn't the kind of writing I enjoy, by any measure, for dipping my toes so regularly into the global shit rivers of global affairs, truly upsets me...but still...it gives my dear mama some pride that I am earning a measly 30 greenbacks per month, for doing something she damn well knows I dislike, but can do, competently enough to have someone pay me. Admittedly, it is next to nothing, and I take little value from the mild recognition I gain from it, from the readers and the website owner...but now and then, it DOES give me a buzz of sorts, to find that my ranting has affected someone, for good or ill.

Now you need to try take this on board...I haven't shared anything I would ever wish to attempt to have published, for financial gain, on this website. My sporadic posts on this particular forum, are solely a vodka drenched effort to share more of my character, with others, who may well be able to relate, not praise...if you can't relate, fine...why not head to the 'gay germans' thread and bother those posters in there??? Surely you would have more fun??? Or truly, is your core aim here, to attempt to upset me? for your comments seem to lend that suggestion. Its like someone writing a post about amauri, and me responding, solely to say 'you know nothing of football'...which would make feel like a cunt, especially if i did not add any reasoning behind my response.

but go ahead, show your intention, but as I say to AZZURRI, i simply have no interest in exchanging insults. It never leads to anything warm or valuable...

1: Good, I don't fucking want to.
2: THEN GO THERE AND DO IT!

so seven, and azzurri, why not try listening to this...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C4D1HSL7P98
time to leave these screams for pointless battle, smoke a J, and pretend i am the chap in this video...and smile.

fucking gay

Why do you keep making these threads when you know certain members are just going to come criticize you?

If you want something's devote attention then get a pet.

I don't like reading comma-infested rambles too often but he's quite interesting.

Commas?

The question marks weren't obtrusive enough?

so how many of you ppl suggest reading that?
we should make a poll

Good idea, poll to be added.

 

[ßöмßäяðîëя]

Poll added.

 

[X Æ A-12]

Just give him one thread to post all his stuff in.

 

[Enron]

There already is one.

 

[X Æ A-12]

Then why is he still opening new threads?

 

[Enron]

He felt it was a new topic?

 

[ßöмßäяðîëя]

I hope he doesn't open a new one so I don't have to start closing this shit down.


But yea, he has that "ramblings from the gutter" thread or whatever.

Someone find it so I can merge them.

 

[Red]

http://www.juventuz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=30180

 

[IrishZebra]

Dudes, this is gay.

 

[Red]

You with the half naked guy in your 'tar, pipe down.

 

[IrishZebra]

fully clothed.

 

[bianconero]

I have to say that I read that, which is more than I do usually.

 

[swag]

I have to say that I read that, which is more than I do usually.

Zizou is the new #6?!