A short story (1 Viewer)

Sivori

Senior Member
Jul 17, 2002
810
#1
-"Is that a banana in your pocket, or are you just happy to see me?"

-"No, it's a banana"

-?

-"Yeah, look..."

-"Ahh, I see..."

-"I only use the finest Chiquita bananas. Wanna bite?"

-"Sure"

-"How is it?"

-"It's OK."

-"It's great.
 

Dj Juve

Senior Member
Jul 12, 2002
9,597
#5
-Modified-

-"Is that a banana in your pocket, or are you just happy to see me?"

-"No, it's a banana"

-?

-"Yeah, look..."

-"Ahh, I see..."

-"I only use the finest Chiquita bananas. Wanna bite?"

-"Sure"

-"Oww!! Wrong banana!!! matha&$#@*!!

-"hey, that was delicious"


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Sivori

Sivori

Senior Member
Jul 17, 2002
810
#6
I see where you're getting at, but I sort of think that it lost the subtelty and pointlessness of the original. ;)
 

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