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HelterSkelter

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Apr 15, 2005
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Ive uploaded some of my original songs here:

http://www.soundclick.com/salmanzafar

Its nothing too special.I sang all of them,and i know im a horrible singer.Most people here wont get the lyrics because they arent in English.But i just want a general opinion on the songs..you know,the playing,melody n all etc.Everything was recorded at home on my PC.The quality isnt professional at all.
 

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Jun 26, 2007
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Bulandi Pe: As you said, it would sound way better with more expensive material. Too bad the piano riff is played on a keyboard without key impact dynamics, and you're indeed not quite the singer :). Pure musically it's alright I guess, it could be a song of one of those minimalistic rock bands.

Putlay: I don't like the vocal melody. Also you shouldn't play the same melody with the keyboard in the intro. The guitar solo sounds kind of wrong being played over the chord progression. You really made some weird choices in this one.

Janwar: Sounds good, definately the best one of the 3. The only thing I would change is the intro, it doesn't seem to match with the rest of the song.
 
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HelterSkelter

HelterSkelter

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    I kinda like the solo on Putlay.Janwar is my personal fave out of the 3 too.but thanks for lending the songs an ear!
     

    Snoop

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    Oct 2, 2001
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    Salman quit these man, and start with some Rock! And welcome, you told me to be honest and not nice. :D
     
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    HelterSkelter

    HelterSkelter

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    The softwares on my Pc dont allow me to get proper guitar sounds.Plus i dont have enough money to go into the studio and record hard core rock:sad:
     

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