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what do you think about my poems
If I'm going to be honest; I don't like it that much. I don't like how you end each sentence with the ".."'s, and it's too straightforward. Try using more imagery, try to be more subtle and maybe spice up the structure a bit :) .
Torkel
Post #9
Sep 22, 2003
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The hangout
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