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  1. what do you think about my poems

    the question is are YOU on my side ;) the answer is yes. you are on my side ;) my bad side ;) *uproarious and riotous laughter* :D

  2. what do you think about my poems

    no changes are not bad. its just that the end product must have a certain flow and familiarity to it. personally i write poetry for myself not for others. i might do so in the future. but i feel a sense of familiarity when i read my own words. when im reading someone elses im absorbing it...

  3. what do you think about my poems

    yeah but its his creative juices and it comes from his muse. corrupting it with your muse isnt right...

  4. what do you think about my poems

    goat write your own poem :p good try though :)

  5. what do you think about my poems

    wow. dolce this is deep its beautiful. the english may not be perfect but its amazing... it might be better if you focus on a description. like take a stanza to describe the scar. and start from there- sort of like a camera shot in the intro of a movie...